I am fickle. Every two or three years I have a new hobby. Now my hobby is making soap. I don’t use the soap that I make, it is just a craft for me. Making soap is provide me with coping skills. It helps me to relax and forget about every day stress and routine. Also, I make soap with my clients as therapeutic activity. When my clients make soap with me they present on what are they doing and that helps them to open their minds to talk with me about their feelings. Making soap helps me to start an open and confidential dialog. Well, let me explain to you guys how I make soap. For making soap I need a mold, soap supply, soap color and some scent if I want my soap to have a nice smell.
I cut a piece of soap from the big soap brick and put these piece of soap in a glass jar to melt them in microwave until they becomes liquid. Then I stirring in the color and scent. Then I pour the liquid soap in the mold. Then I have to wait until the soap is room temperature and can be removed from the mold. And WOW! We have a beautiful piece of soap. That soap can be a great present for everyone because I can use different shapes of molds with different design and size.
I order the soap supply on the internet, they delivered a 25 lb. box of soap. The molds I buy on ebay or order from Russia from a woman who makes unique silicone molds for making soap. But now I started a new level in my hobby. I decided to make molds myself. This is my first experiment and let’s see what will happen.
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Making soap is provide me with coping skills. — Making soap is to provide me with coping skills.
make soap with my clients as therapeutic activity -make soap with my clients as a therapeutic activity
put these piece of soap in a glass jar — put this piece of soap in a glass jar
until they becomes liquid — until it becomes liquidThen I stirring in the color and scent — Then I stir in the color and scent
Как то так у меня получилось
Честно? Нет, я их просто не вижу, мне понадобилось несколько дней что бы исправить их, свежий взгляд и гугл, когда вы только запостили мои ошибки я просто даже представить не могла что вы от меня хотите )))) Я еще другие ошибки понаходила в сочинении, можно выложить исправленный вариант?
Часть поправила сама и учительница отшлифовала.
I am fickle. Every two or three years I get a new hobby. Now my hobby is making soap. I don’t use the soap that I make, it is just a craft for me. Making soap is to provide me with coping skills. It helps me to relax and forget about every day stress and routine. Also, I make soap with my clients as a therapeutic activity. When my clients make soap with me they concentrate on what they are doing and that helps them to open up their minds and talk to me about their feelings. Making soap helps me to begin an open and confidential dialog. Well, let me explain to you how I make soap. For making soap I need a mold, soap supply, soap color and some scent if I want my soap to have a nice smell.
I cut a piece of soap from the big soap brick and put this piece of soap in a glass jar to melt in microwave until it becomes liquid. Then I stir in the color and scent. Then I pour the liquid soap in the mold. Then I have to wait until the soap becomes room temperature and can be removed from the mold. And WOW! We have a beautiful piece of soap. That soap can be a great present for everyone because I can use different molds with different designs and sizes.
I order my soap
supply on the internet, and they deliver a
25 lb. box of soap. The molds I buy on ebay or order from Russia from a woman
who makes her
own silicone molds for making soap. But now I
have started a new stage in my hobby. I decided to make the molds myself. This is my first experiment and
let’s see what will happen.
спасибо Иван, учительница придралась но не к грамматике а к стилистике в основном, как она любит говорить "тебя поймут но мы так не говорим" например убрали guys (обращение ребята это для подростков) или поправили I have started a new stage или заменили start на begin
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Довольно интересно. Художник дремлет в каждом.